I enjoyed bat down and swimming. I didn't like walking up the Mount. I wouldn't want to change anything. By Lachie
My favourite activity was swimming at the hot pools. Another activity I enjoyed was walking around the Mount if I could change anything it would be reading a book at 7 o clock at night. By Ben M
26.05.14Sensing AutumnOn freezing cold autumn mornings.My feet feel cold grass.My nose smells hot mince pies and hot chocolate. My legs feel coldness outside.My ears hear the sound of leaves crunching. My eyes see leaves on the ground.My hands feel cold wind.My mouth tastes warm hot chocolate ready to drink.My mind thinks I should go inside.That summer takes a long time to return.Written By Ben M.
On frozen autumn mornings… my feet feel frozen and numb my nose smells the air going by my legs feel cold goose bumps my ears hear the wind going through the air my eyes see leaves falling from the trees my hands feel numb goose bumps bumping up like bumping bumps my mouth tastes warm hot chocolate my mind thinks that there is going to be a windy storm That summer takes its time, I think that is good Written by Lachie
Wish list1.Money for charity2.I wish poor people weren't poor any more3.I wish Santa was fit4.I wish people were happyLachie
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I enjoyed bat down and swimming. I didn't like walking up the Mount. I wouldn't want to change anything. By Lachie
ReplyDeleteMy favourite activity was swimming at the hot pools. Another activity I enjoyed was walking around the Mount if I could change anything it would be reading a book at 7 o clock at night. By Ben M
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ReplyDeleteSensing Autumn
On freezing cold autumn mornings.
My feet feel cold grass.
My nose smells hot mince pies and hot chocolate.
My legs feel coldness outside.
My ears hear the sound of leaves crunching.
My eyes see leaves on the ground.
My hands feel cold wind.
My mouth tastes warm hot chocolate ready to drink.
My mind thinks I should go inside.
That summer takes a long time to return.
Written By Ben M.
On frozen autumn mornings…
ReplyDeletemy feet feel frozen and numb
my nose smells the air going by
my legs feel cold goose bumps
my ears hear the wind going through the air
my eyes see leaves falling from the trees
my hands feel numb goose bumps bumping up like bumping bumps
my mouth tastes warm hot chocolate
my mind thinks that there is going to be a windy storm
That summer takes its time, I think that is good
Written by Lachie
Wish list
ReplyDelete1.Money for charity
2.I wish poor people weren't poor any more
3.I wish Santa was fit
4.I wish people were happy
Lachie
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